Expression: 3 marks Grammatical accuracy, appropriate words and spellings `[1//2%]` Coherence and relevance of ideas and style `[1//2%]` Value points: Both Mr. Lamb and Derry suffer from problems. Mr. Lamb had a tinned leg whereas Derry had a burnt face. But both of them differ in their attitude towards handling their problems. Mr. Lamb Very positive in his outlook. Sees the beauty in everything, including weeds.
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Doesn’t let physical handicap prevent him from living life to the fullest. Very friendly, opened his doors to the world. Sees that the world and people are important. Strong- doesn’t let people’s negative comments hurt him. Practical, knows one’s life is in one’s own hands. Shows understanding of Derry’s problems.
Derry Scared of meeting people as he hates seeing their fear of him and facing their rejection. Very sensitive—people’s comments hurt him deeply. Upset with parents’ over protectiveness and mother’s revulsion with his face. Defiant, rude as he is too scared to talk to people. Negative about everything – sees everything in a bad light. Indulges in self-pity over his face. Hates sympathy. Hates the world and keeps away from it. Inner deep desire to be accepted which he hides under an abrasive exterior. Changes at the end after listening to Mr Lamb. Ready to face the world and overcome obstacles to do so. Finds courage and strength to get what he wants.
